Period 9 writing
一．教材分析：
In this period ,the teaching activities will focus on writing. These activities offer students the opportunity to discuss what qualities should a great person have , to imagine if you are required to make a short description about someone .then to write a passage to introduce a famous person.
二．学情分析：
Our students have difficulties in writing, the teacher should teach them make some sentences first. And then ask the Ss to practice how to write an article.
三．教学重点：
Develop students ' speaking and writing abilities
Let students learn how to make description.
四．教学难点：
Let students discuss how to introduce a famous person.
How to develop students' writing ability
五：三维目标:
知识目标
Get students to learn more about a balanced diet and healthy eating.
Let students know how to give suggestions and advice
能力目标
Train students' speaking ability by discussing.
Develop students' writing ability by learning to write a description
情感目标
Enrich students' knowledge of famous person.
Train students' writing ability to cooperate with others.
六．教学过程（Teaching procedure)
Step 1 revision
（1.）Check the homework exercises
（2.）Ask the students to tell who is the heroine in their heart.
II. speaking
怎样写人物简介
?（一）人物简介的写作步骤；
概况）age, sex, birth-place, background
外貌）appearance ,character
教育）education
生平）big events in one’s life ( in order of time )
评价）evaluation
(二) 语法，句法高分tips
A. 概况 （尽量用同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺) 如；
1) Born in Poland on Nov. 7 ，1867, Madam Curie is a great scientist.
2) Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12th, 1809.
3) Born of a poor clerk's family, Charles Dickens, a great novelist, had little schooling.
4) Sun Showier, a world champion in diving, is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.
B．外貌,性格 (巧用with做定语) 如；
1) He is near-sighted /far-sighted guy with a pair of glasses on his nose.
2) She is good-looking /ordinary-looking/funny-looking with long beautiful hair.
3) He is a tall and thin guy with thick eyebrows, looking very handsome.
4) Born in Germany, Einstein is a great scientist with an extraordinary imagination.
常用描写人物的形容词:
determined (有毅力的)
competent 有能力的
warm - hearted （热心肠的
easy - going （温和宽容的）
energetic(精力充沛)
generous(慷慨的)
intelligent（精明的）
ambitious(雄心的)
forgetful(健忘的)
honest (诚实的)
humorous （幽默的）
independent (独立的)
diligent （勤奋的）
cautious (谨慎的)
talkative （多话的)
healthy （健康的）
attractive （有吸引力的）
patient (耐心的)
strict (严格的)
modest(谦虚的)
considerate(考虑周到的)
outstanding (杰出的)
optimistic(乐观的)
enthusiastic（热情的）
absent - minded （心不在焉的）
bad - tempered （脾气不好的）
pessimistic(悲观的)
C. 教育经历 (注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼) 如；
1）Majored in Science, he graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies.
2）Graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctor's degree.
D．生平 (尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章)如；
1）Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.
2）He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.
3）So hard does he work that he devotes almost all his lifetime to our human cause.
4）With great determination and perseverance, he took 37 years to finish the book, which makes a great contribution to China.
E．评估 （注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语，词组）如；
1）Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him .
2）He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man.
3）We sing high praise for his brave stories, and his heroic story will spread all of China.
4）Lishizhen makes great contributions to Medical literature.
（三）. Summary
1. Possible content:
1）personal information
2）personality and quality
3）things she/he has done
4）evaluation from other people
2). Possible ways to write the article:
Part 1: an introduction of the person
Part 2: supporting details
1) characters
2) achievements
Part 3: a conclusion
1) what you think of him/her
2) how people view him or her
有用句型：
……was/ were born in …on…
his/her family was so poor that…
his/ her father was very strict with him…
when he was a small boy/ young
during his/ her childhood
live a happy/ hard life
graduate from…department of …university
when at college, he majored in…
devote his lifetime/himself to…
concentrate himself to…
make up one’s mind to do sth.
make rapid progress in …
set a new world record of …
equal the world record
win (won) a gold /silver/ bronze medal
be selected to/ become a member of…
go through hardship
overcome many difficulties
one of the best/ most important …
set a good example for…
a model teacher/worker
be respected by everyone
speak/ think highly of…
be honored as (an excellent athlete)
His hard work brought him great success.
make great contributions to…
III. writing task
根据下列提示，写一篇介绍我国著名的水稻专家袁隆平的文章。
1． 袁隆平, 1937年9月7日出生在重庆的一个贫困农民家庭。
2． 1953年毕业于西南农学院，毕业后被分配到湘西农校任教。
3． 1964年开始从事水稻研究。1981年荣获我国第一个国家发明特等奖，被国际上誉为“杂交水稻之父”。
4． 生活简朴，不计名利。
注意：
1）要有标题。
2）介绍须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性。
Yuan Longping
Born on September 7, 1937 in Chongqing, Yuan Longping was from a poor farmer’s family. Having graduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953, he was sent to work as a teacher in the Agriculture School in the west of Hunan. He began his research in rice in 1964 and got the First National Special Prize for Invention in 1981. He is honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice” by the international friends. Famous as he is, he cares little for money and fame.
板书设计
问题研讨（课堂提问，练习和作业设计）
课堂提问
who do you admire most in your heart?
what qualities do you think a famous person should have?
练习
句子翻译
1温家宝总是举止得体。
Wen Jiabao always behaves himself / well
2李泳不但很有天赋而且很勤奋。
Li Yong is not only gifted but also diligent.
XXX是个很有能力的班长。
XXX is a very capable monitor.
王海军（刘鑫童）有一颗宽容的心。
Wang Haijun (Liu Xintong) has got a forgiving heart.
/ is tolerant.
吴尊很受年轻人的欢迎。
Wu Zun is very popular with the young.
林乔禹正在中山大学主修音乐
Lin Qiaoyu is majoring in music at Zhongshan University
作业
A Level 阅读理解
My aunt Edith was a widow of 50，working as a secretary，when doctors discovered she had got what was then thought to be a very serious heart illness.
Aunt Edith didn’t accept defeat easily. She began studying medical reports in library and found an article in a magazine about a well-known heart doctor，Dr.Michael Debakey，of Houston，Texas. He had saved the life of someone with the same illness. The article said Dr Debakey’s fees were very high；Aunt Edith couldn’t possibly pay them. But could he tell her of someone whose fee she could pay?
So Aunt Edith wrote to him. She simply listed her reasons for wanting to live：her three children，who would be on their own in three or four years and among them a little girl who always dreamed of traveling and seeing the world. There wasn’t a word of self-pity-only warmth and humor and the joy of living. She mailed the letter，not really expecting an answer.
A few days later，my doorbell rang. Aunt Edith didn’t wait to come in；she stood in the hall and read aloud:
Your beautiful letter moved me very deeply. If you can come to Houston，there will be no charge for either the hospital or the operation.
Signed：Michael Debakey
That was seven years ago. Since then，Aunt Edith has been around the world. Her three children are happily married. For her age，she is one of the youngest，most alive people I know.
1. “Aunt Edith didn’t accept defeat easily” means that .
A. she was very beautiful
B. she was very strong
C. she was very brave
D. she was very warm hearted
2. Why did Aunt Edith write to Dr. Debakey? Because .
A. she had no time to visit him
B. she didn’t know the way to Houston
C. she didn’t believe in him
D. she wanted to get some help from him
3.In fact，Aunt Edith’s letter to Dr.Debakey was full of .
A. courage B .illness
C. pity D. sadness
4.After reading Dr.Debakey’s letter，Aunt Edith felt .
A. discouraged B. frightened
C. disappointed D. encouraged
B level
The best supporting actress（女配角演员)of 1959 was Shalley Winters. Shalley Winters，born in 1932，first played in comedies（喜剧)musicals on Broadway. She appeared in films from 1943 and attracted attention in A Double Life（1948）|. Shalley Winters impressed her audience with her performance in The Diary of Anne Trank for which she won an Oscar. By then she had become skilled in playing weak women whose youth was fading（消失)and who were losing their attention.
1.Shalley Winters began her films career（生涯) .
A. in 1948 B. at the age of 11
C. on Broadway D. by playing in comedies and musicals
2.The Diary of Anne Trank was filmed .
A. in 1943 B. in 1948
C. in 1959 D. in the 1960s
3. By 1959 Shalley Winters .
A. had become weak
B. had lost her attraction to the audience
C. had become much older
D. had become famous
4.The best title for this passage is “ ”.
A. Oscar Winner
B. How Shalley Winters Won Oscar
C. A Story of Shalley Winters
D. Diary of Anne Trank
C level
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