幻灯片 1写作突破八 开放式作文
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幻灯片 2[分析指导]
开放式作文不同于传统的书面表达。传统的书面表达是一种控制性写作，即通过要点提示、图画、表格等命题形式来限定书面表达的内容、人称、时态、词数、文体等，自由发挥的空间不大，在一定程度上限制了考生的思维。而开放式作文只给出主题、两三点提示或一段素材，然后由考生在此基础上充分发挥想象力，自由发挥，自由创作。开放式作文对考生的能力要求更高，考查也更全面。它不仅考查考生的书面语言表达能力、语言组织能力，而且考查考生的逻辑思维能力、发散思维能力、丰富的想象力以及创新思维能力。
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幻灯片 3[典题示例]
(2010·安徽)
假设你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动，征文的内容要求你在电视、手机(cell)和网络三者中，放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以“Which would you give up: TV, cell, or Web？”为题，写一篇英语短文。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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幻灯片 4[写作点拨]
本篇属于开放式作文。要求学生根据个人情况随意放弃其中一个，并陈述自己认为合理的原则。试题贴近学生生活实际，给学生提供了充分的拓展空间。
[写作要点]
1．信息时代的三种媒体(the three media in an information age)
2．放弃其中一个(giving up one of them)
3．理由(reasons)
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幻灯片 5[参考范文]
Which would you give up: TV, cell, or Web?
We are now living in an information age, in which TV, cell and Web are widely used. it seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them.
However, if I had to give up one of them. I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Internet. I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy and there're too many commercials. Besides, most programs on TV are also available elsewhere.
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幻灯片 6As for cells and the Web, they are more necessary to me. I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family, and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.
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幻灯片 7[露一小手]
调查显示，近几年我国中学生的健康状况不容乐观，近视眼、肥胖和体质弱等情况比较普遍。请写一篇120词左右的文章，分析造成此状况的原因及其危害，并提出改进措施。
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幻灯片 8
[参考范文]
Research shows that middle school students' health condition is declining obviously in recent years. Most students are shortsighted, some are overweight or weak and many can't reach the physical health standard. These problems are very common.
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幻灯片 9
What causes such problems? First, many students spend too much time before computers or TV sets. Second, students have to prepare themselves for examinations in the severely competitive society. As a consequence, they spend most of their time on their subjects. Third, many of them don't form the habit of taking physical exercise regularly.
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幻灯片 10
It's necessary to find ways to improve students' health condition. One available way is to do physical exercises at least an hour every day. In addition, a healthy diet is also contributive to it. Finally, the schools should take measures to reduce the heavy schoolwork burdens of the students.
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