山东德州2013届高考英语短文改错+书面表达精练精析5
Ⅰ. 短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
In my school six students punished for cheating in the mid-terms, but
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this didn’t stop some students from doing the same thing. In one day’s
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exams, on my way to home I heard some students talking with each other. “I
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was too worried that I sent a message to everyone I know to ask the answers
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of the questions on the politics exam paper. ” It’s clear that many students
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cheated. This six unlucky students became the “killed chickens”, but the
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“monkeys” were not frightened at all. More and more students start cheating
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in school exams. That must be how so many students do well in the exams
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at their own school, and fail in the college entrance examinations. I do hope
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that useful measures could be taken stop cheating in exams. 10. _______
Ⅱ. 书面表达
假设你是李华。最近，你的英国笔友Mike来信说他参军了。同时，他向你了解有关在中国参军的要求以及你对参军的想法。请根据以下内容给Mike写一封回信。
入伍条件：
1. 年龄18~20岁
2. 身体健康
3. 身高：男, 1. 62米以上；女, 1. 60米以上
你的想法：
1. 自小崇拜军人，渴望尽早参军。
2. 参军可以保卫祖国，丰富人生经历。
3. 相信自己会喜欢部队生活，成为一名优秀的战士。
注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅰ. 1. 【解析】punished前加were were punished“被惩罚”，要用被动。
2. 【解析】In→After 由句意知, 此处是说“一天的考试后”，所以用after。
3. 【解析】去掉to on my way home“在我回家的路上”，home是副词，前面无需加to。
4. 【解析】too→so so. . . that. . . “如此……以至于……”，为固定搭配 。
5. 【解析】of→to the answers to the questions“问题的答案”，介词要用to，而不是of。
6. 【解析】This→These “六位不幸的学生”，是复数概念。
7. √
8. 【解析】how→why 由句意知“这就是……的原因”，故用why。
9. 【解析】and→but 分句间是转折关系不是顺承关系。
10. 【解析】stop前加to take measures to do sth. “采取措施做某事”。
Ⅱ. 【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to know that you have joined the British Army. Congratulations!
In China, if you want to join the army, you must be between 18 and 20 years old and in good health. Besides, males should be over 162 cm tall and females over 160 cm.
As far as I am concerned, I have been admiring soldiers very much since I was a child. Now I’m eager to join the army. To be a soldier, I can defend my country and enrich my life experience. I’m sure I will enjoy my life there if I join the army. I’m sure I will become an excellent soldier soon. I wish to know more about your life in the army.
Yours,
Li Hua
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