山东德州2013届高考英语短文改错+书面表达精练精析6
Ⅰ. 短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
After I finished the school this year, I began 1. _______
to look for work. Now several month later, I still 2. _______
hadn’t found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday 3. _______
morning I received a phone call from a man calling him 4. _______
Mr Smith. He said to me on the phone, “I hear that you do 5. _______
very well in your studies. I may have a job for you. ” 6. _______
I entered his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped 7. _______
that I will go through the job-hunting talk that day and he 8. _______
would take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9. _______
what he said disappointing. He only needed a model. 10. _______
Ⅱ. 书面表达
第30届夏季奥运会将于2012年7月27日至8月12日在伦敦举行。假定你是李华，希望成为一名奥运会志愿者。请根据下面表格中的内容用英语给组委会写一封申请信。
简 况
年龄、性别、学历
优 势
英语水平较高
爱好体育、有相关经历
乐于助人、善于合作
了解伦敦基本情况
承 诺
提供优质服务
注意: 1. 词数：100左右（开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam，
My name is Li Hua. I’m very glad that the 30th Summer Olympic Games will be held in London during July 27—August 12，2012. I’d like to be a volunteer for the Games.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
Ⅰ. 1. 【解析】去掉the finish school“毕业”，school前不用冠词。
2. 【解析】month→months several months later“数月之后”，可数名词month要用复数。
3. 【解析】interested后加in be interested in“对……感兴趣”。
4. 【解析】him→himself calling himself Mr Smith“称他自己是史密斯先生”。
5. 【解析】do→did do动作是发生在过去的事，故用一般过去时。
6. √
7. 【解析】beaten→beating beat“心跳”和heart之间是主动关系，要用现在分词。
8. 【解析】will→would 和主句I hoped相对应，此处用would。
9. 【解析】surprised→surprise to one’s surprise“使某人惊奇的是”，surprise是名词。
10. 【解析】said 后加 was what he said“他所说的话”作主语，其后缺谓语。
Ⅱ. 【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I’m very glad that the 30th Summer Olympic Games will be held in London during July 27—August 12, 2012. I’d like to be a volunteer for the Games.
I’m a boy/girl of 18, a senior high school student. I believe I can do a good job for the Games. First of all, I’m good at English and I can speak English fluently and freely. I’m fond of sports and I’ve worked as a volunteer at several great games in our country before. Most importantly, I’m always ready to help others and good at cooperating with others. Besides, I know London very well.
I promise I’ll try to offer my best service to the people at the Games. I would be very happy if I could be chosen as a volunteer.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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