2013高考英语二轮（文章题）训练（35）及答案
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请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
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一、评分原则：
1．本题总分为15分，按4个档次给分。
2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调
整档次，最后给分。
3．评分时应考虑：文章是否扣题，结构是否完整，内容是否充实、健康，思维是否活跃，逻辑是否
清晰，语言是否规范，交际是否得体。
4．拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可
接受。
5．词数少于50，从总分中减去1分。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求：
第一档
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
·内容充实，体现了活跃的思维和清晰的逻辑；
·交际得体，表达时充分考虑到了交际对象的需求；
·体现出较强的语言运用能力。
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
13分～15分
第二档
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
·内容、逻辑和交际等方面基本符合要求；
·所用语法和词汇满足了任务的要求；
·语法或用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。
基本达到了预期的写作目的。
9分～12分
第三档
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
·表达未能切题；
·所用词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响了对写作内容的理解。
未能清楚地传达信息。
4分～8分
第四档
未完成试题规定的任务。
·写了少量相关信息；
·语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对写作内容的理解。
1分～3分
0分
未传达任何信息；所写内容与要求无关。
三、One possible version:
In the picture, a huge elephant is walking leisurely forward and above it is a small bird flying gaily ahead. There is a second bird following them. But to my surprise, instead of accompanying the bird in flight, it tries hard to follow in the tracks of the elephant.
What the picture conveys to us is that with a powerful influence of a big shot like the elephant, some people go their own way like the bird in flight, while others blindly struggle to copy the big shot and get nowhere, like the bird making every effort to follow in the elephant’s footsteps. Therefore, in the course of pursuing our dreams, we should be aware and make the best of our own strengths rather than stumble behind others embarrassedly ignoring our own strong points.
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阅读下列短文，根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
Do you constantly use the computer, whether for learning or entertainment? Computers give off radiation that is bad for your health, but here are some ways to protect yourself from computer radiation.
_71_ Green tea can be absorbed by the body easily into a form of vitamin A, which helps reduce radiation. _72_
It is advisable to attach a radiation filter plate （辐射过滤板） in front of your computer’s screen. Make sure to avoid putting any metal substances near your computer as these may have reflected some of the electromagnetic waves that are harmful to your health. _73_The brighter the screen the higher the radiation there will be and vice versa.
You can also put some radiation-absorbing plants such as several cacti near your computer to prevent radiation.
Make sure you do a skincare protection before sitting in front of the computer. _74_Wash your face soon after using the computer in order to reduce 70% of the radiation.
_75_ Old computer in general, has one to two times more radiations released than the new one within the same distance.
A. And adjust the brightness of your computer screen.
B. Apply a layer of facial mask to protect yourself.
C. And adjust the sound level on your computer.
D. The most efficient way is by drinking some coffee regularly.
E. The simplest way is by drinking 2 & 3 cups of green tea every day.
F. If possible, purchase a new computer instead of using an old model computer.
G. It also helps keep our eyes see things clearly in the dark by improving the visual ability.
参考答案 七选五：EGABF
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短文改错
Last Sunday morning when I got up, to me great surprise,
I found that we had a big snowfall. I was very excited because
it was a long time that I had ever seen such a heavy snowfall.
So I decided to call my friends to go out to play snow together.
We made up some snowmen and rolled some snowballs,
but we enjoyed the fun of playing fighting games. Just then
we noticed that the buses and cars move very slowly
because the heavy snow. So we went to clean the snow so as to
help the traffic go safely. After the all morning’s hard work,
we cleaned the snows on the road, and we went home happily.
改错：1.me—my 2.big—heavy 3.that—since 4.play后加with
5. 去掉made后面的up 6. but—and 7.move—moved 8.because后加of
9. all—whole 10.snows—snow
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