2013高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（29）之（01）及参考范文：
(十四)
(2011·北京卷第二节)
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50。
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
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参考范文
In the picture, there stands a tree full of fruit on one side of the stream. Across the stream, a man is trying to reach out on the edge of the bank for the fruit with a net attached to a pole. Not far away there is a bridge that can lead him to the tree for more fruit.
The message conveyed in the picture is clear. In pursuing a dream, we might focus on only one way of making it come true, forgetting that there may be alternatives. As indicated in the picture, if the man is willing to look for other possibilities, he can find a better and more rewarding way to achieve his goal. All he has to do is to turn around, cross the bridge and walk to the tree.
(十五)
(2011·湖南卷)
假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按如下要求完成一篇短文：
1．简要描述下图内容，并点明主题；
2．联系实际，表达该图带给你的启示。
注意：
1．词数不少于120个；
2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
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参考范文
As is illustrated in the picture，one drop of water does not make a sea; one tree does not make a forest；one person does not make a society.It tells us that in our society two heads are better than one and unity is strength.Nowadays there are still many poor students.They can not afford to go to school.Luckily，many people and organizations donate a lot of money to help them receive college education smoothly.
In a word，we should offer our help and love to the persons in need.I believe that if every one of us can give help and love to others ，the relationship between people will be harmonious and our society will be a better place for us to live in.
(十六)
(2011·陕西卷)
假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。
I'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter：be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?
写作要点：
1．表明自己的看法；
2．陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)；
3．提出至少两条建议。
要求：
1．短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。
2．短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。
3．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。
4．书写须清晰、工整。
Hi，TigerMom，
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is
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参考范文
Hi,_TigerMom，
What_puzzles_you_is_actually_a_puzzle_for_many_parents_in_China_.My_idea_is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom , emotion ，health and life attitude should never be ignored.There are many examples around us.Some all A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected .The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice.More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.
(十七)
(2011·江西卷)
假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let's Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：
1．目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题。
2．骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。
参考词汇：低碳生活(low-carbon life)；节能(energy saving)
注意：1.词数：120词左右；
2．演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数。
Good morning，everyone，
I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let's Ride Bicycles”．
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参考范文
Good_morning,_everyone，
I'm_Li_Hua_from_Xingguang_Middle_School._The_topic_of_my_speech_is__“Let's_Ride_Bicycles”．
As is known to all, with the improvement of people's living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
How can we solve the problems then? As far as I'm concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas. What's more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.
Therefore, let's take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!
Thank_you！
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(2011·山师附中打靶考试)
假设你叫李华，现是山东大学的一名新生。请你根据以下提示，给你中学的英语老师李老师写一封感谢信，表达对他的爱戴和尊敬。词数：120～150。
提示：
1．对英语老师李老师教学的评价。
2．回顾在校时你的心情。
3．对老师的理解和祝愿。
信的开头已经写好，但不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Li，
I'm very excited to write to express my thanks to you.
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Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear_Mr_Li，
I'm_very_excited_to_write_to_express_my_thanks_to_you._
I am now a freshman of Shandong University, which I have been dreaming about. Mr Li, I still remember the days when you taught me English. My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work. However, at one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations made me depressed. I was tired of the warning that if I didn't do my best, I wouldn't have the chance to go to college. Thanks for your encouragement; if not, I wouldn't have realized my dream. And now I really understand you. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Are you still so busy? How I miss you!
Hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours，
Li_Hua
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(2011·山师附中打靶考试)
假设你叫王平，现在在英国工作，你的朋友陈立写信告诉你他打算赴英留学，想知道初到英国可能会遇到的困难。请你用英语给他写一封回信，信的内容应包括：
1．可能会遇到的困难：语言方面的障碍、饮食的不习惯、想家孤独等；
2．鼓励他并表示愿意帮助他。
注意：
1．词数：120～150。
2.信的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Chen Li，
I'm glad to hear from you. You asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here in UK.
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Yours，
Wang Ping
参考范文
Dear_Chen_Li,_
I'm_glad_to_hear_from_you._You_asked_me_about_the_difficulties_you_may_meet_with_when_you_get_here_in_UK. Now，I'd like to tell you something about it.
First，you may have problems about the language which you think you have learned so well. You may find it difficult to communicate with the natives, because many of them have a strong accent. Besides，you may not get used to the western food here or even hate to have it. What's more，you may feel lonely and miss your family and friends，especially in the very beginning.
However，you needn't worry about it. Several weeks later，you will get used to everything here and get to love the place，and I'll also try my best to help you when necessary.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Wang_Ping
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