2013高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（32）及参考范文：书面表达精选（1）
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假如你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：游乐园 amusement park 垃圾箱 bin
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本文是一篇叙事文，记述一次春游过程。从准备到动身，从活动到结束。注意看清图片表述的内容，同时注意衔接要自然。
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Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.
The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.
We were tired but happy.
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本文要点全面，层次分明。语言运用上，come up with, go boating, set off, pick up等短语的运用给文章增色不少。
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近年来，西风东渐。圣诞节、情人节、母亲节、愚人节等“洋节”纷纷登陆我国，而且越来越受到年轻人的青睐。人们对这种现象看法不一。请你根据生活实际，用英语简要描述这种现象，并阐明你的观点。
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这是一篇开放式作文。描述“洋节”登陆我国并深受欢迎这一现象，用一般现在时；阐明观点也用一般现在时。
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Nowadays western festivals are becoming more and more popular in China, especially among the teenagers. When Valentine's Day arrives, young lovers would buy gifts of all kinds for each other. And on Mother's day, mothers often receive flowers from their children to show their love. Before Christmas Day, you can see the hats of Santa Claus sold everywhere in the streets, and Christmas trees are dotted here and there.
As we all know, in different countries festivals come from different cultural backgrounds, historical events, or religious beliefs. It originally belonged to the place where it started, but I think it can be accepted by people of other places, as long as they think it is interesting and enjoyable. Take Mother's Day for example, everybody loves his mother, and this festival actually meets the needs of children to show their mother their deep love, no matter where it comes.
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该文以先总后分的结构描述了“情节人、母亲节和圣诞节”在我国大受欢迎的现象。高级词语As we all know, as long as, take...for example等的使用，提升了文章的层次。
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(2011·南师大附中冲刺卷)
最近，很多中学生都纷纷开起了自己的博客。一方面，博客可以作为展示自己的窗口，可以释放学习的压力，因此已经被越来越多的中学生所接受。但是，另一方面，很多家长和老师都认为管理个人博客要花相当多的时间和精力，会耽误学习。
请对这一现象进行简要介绍，并发表自己的看法。
注意：1.词数：150左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．参考词汇：开博客open one's blog
Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet.
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参考范文
Nowadays,_it_is_a_common_phenomenon_that_more_and_more_high_school_students_open_their_own_blogs_on_the_Internet. For one thing, it can provide a colorful platform to showcase their talent, and it is a way to release their pressure, and all this makes it more and more popular with high school students.
But many parents and teachers hold a different view, they think that managing one's blog will take a lot of time and energy, while this should be used to study which is their main responsibility.
In my opinion, I do approve of this activity. Opening and organizing an eye catching blog needs various abilities such as writing, designing, being skilful at computer and so on. Only if we master those abilities can we make a successful blog. As a consequence, we improve ourselves during the procedures of organizing our blogs.
Blog itself is of little harm. It is your attitude towards it that matters. We should take the advantages and avoid some bad effects.
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(2011·潍坊二模)
假如你是李平，你的好朋友李华来信说，他的同桌经常打断他向他请教问题，他担心会影响自己的学习。请你用英语写一封回信。内容包括：
1.给别人讲题也会提升自己；
2.人人都有长处和不足，可以互相学习；
3.帮助别人学习可以使他们树立自信，从而促进友谊。
注意：
1.词数：120～150，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2.包括所有要点，内容可适当发挥。
Dear Li Hua，
How are things going？
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Yours，
Li Ping
参考范文
Dear_Li_Hua，
How_are_things_going?_In your last letter you talked about your recent worry about your study, mentioning that your desk-mate often interrupts you by asking questions. Now I would like to share my opinion with you.
First of all, there is no need to worry about your studies. When you explain something to others, you can get a better understanding of it, which can improve yourself greatly. So it's good for you. Secondly, as we all know, everyone has strengths and weaknesses. Although your deskmate is not good at lessons, he might do well in other fields like sports or arts. Therefore you can learn from each other. In addition, top students can help slower ones gain confidence by helping them with their lessons, which may help develop a friendship that both of you will treasure all your life.
I hope my advice can help. And best luck with your learning.
Yours，
Li_Ping
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请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇关于“友谊”的短文。
As we know, nobody can go without friends. A good friend is someone who makes us happy or impressive. Friendship helps us understand who we are, why we need each other and what we can do for each other.
注意：
1．无须写标题；
2．内容只需涉及一个方面；
3．必须用生活事例；
4．词数120左右。
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I'll never forget my close friend, Li Hua, in junior middle school. One rainy morning, we two were going upstairs to the teaching building when I fell down. The fall was so heavy that my right knee was black and blue. On seeing that, Li Hua carried me on his back and hurried to the nearest hospital. After an examination, the doctor said that I had to be in hospital for days. Every day after school Li Hua volunteered to help me with my lessons I had missed while in hospital.
Since then we often helped each other not only with our lessons but also with a lot of other matters. Busy as our school life after graduation is, we still pay a visit to each other, send short messages or emails, encouraging each other.
Thank you Li Hua. Wish you happiness and success.
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全世界的环境问题变得越来越严重。根据所给开头，写一篇120～150词的关于环境保护的文章。要点应包括：
(1)环境恶化的现状及原因(汽车、工厂、生活垃圾)。
(2)我们该怎么做及你的倡议。
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.__________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [范文借鉴]
Environmental_problems_are_becoming_more_and_more_serious_all_over_the_world. For example, poisonous gas given off by factories and cars has made the air unhealthy for people to breathe. Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. Furthermore, wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly thrown. Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence.
The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations. As students we can also do something for our environment. For example, turn the lights off when no one is in the classroom.
We believe that doing these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in. (We hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better)．
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假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：
1．说明你是该报的忠实读者
2．赞赏该报优点：
1)兼顾国内外新闻
2)介绍名人成功故事
3．提出建议：
刊登指导英语学习的文章
注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear_Edition-in-Chief，
Congratulations_on_the_5th_anniversary_of_Global_Mirror!
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Sincerely yours，
Li Hua
[范文借鉴]
Dear_Edition-in-Chief，
Congratulations_on_the_5th_anniversary_of_Global_Mirror!
I'm a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.
As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua
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